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This is part of a photography-assignment at school. Going to take photos that portrays the four basic elements (Air, fire, water and earth). This one is water.

Edit: Added watermark for art protection.

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:iconphotoboy1002001:
I like this shot the best of all in your series. The crisp focus and stop motion work very well. However the side light is a good bit too strong. You could have used a little more fill from the left. Maybe a reflector bouncing in some light coming from the opposite side possibly. Stop motion concepts are hard to get original. I have seen this before, but it works very well in the framework of your assignment. It has a good bit of impact on the viewer, and i know many people have not seen anything like this before. Over all well done. I find shots like these are fun to redo and play with the lighting. When i revisit something on a new day I often come up with things i would not have though of in one long shooting session.

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Aaron J. Plotkin
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:iconatomowka:
Awesome work! :) Check out my new contest :)

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:iconeivind31:
thanks ^^

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:icontiapolonia:
Cool idea :)

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:iconeivind31:
thanks ^^

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:icontiapolonia:
Welcome ;)

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Good morning, Espada. There's been an enemy attack. But first... shall we make some tea? :D
:iconprinsezha:
I like how the water looks flowy but frozen in the same time :) great assignment :)
:iconjakubkanera:
interesting image, i like it. nice lighting :-)
:iconeivind31:
Thank you ^^

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Canon
Canon EOS 450D
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May 18, 2009, 6:06:38 PM

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